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René Descartes: Meditations on First Philosophy - Sample student response paper

This sample student response paper examines the student's personal thoughts on Descartes' Meditations on First Philosophy. Unlike a standard essay, this example response paper allows the writer to express their personal opinion on Descartes' arguments, which are lacking in some respects, according to the writer. It would be a good reference for students who need to write a response paper to their own assignments.

Meditations on Descartes' flawed logic

After reading through Descartes' Meditations on First Philosophy, I must admit that I am neither convinced by his ideas nor satisfied by his explanations. That is not to say I did not find his arguments interesting-far from it in fact-they were merely insufficient to persuade me. I assume that were we to read Descartes' responses to the questions he mentions in introduc-tion, I imagine some of my own questions might be answered, but until that time I will remain unconvinced.

To begin with, as we see in the First Meditation, Descartes eradicates the foundations of common beliefs and earthly perceptions in attempt to lay down new foundations for a very struc-tured, purposeful argument. This idea, in conjunction with the cogito ergo sum are among the few things that I do not disagree with. The issues I have arise when he attempts to build his argument from this point, as he seems to be starting from the middle. As I understand it, Des-cartes begins his argument with Descartes, the only thing he knows to exist, and from there proceeds to establish the rest of the universe. Not only does this seem a bit egocentric to me, but he later establishes facts that seem to contradict his method. Take, for example, his proof that God exists. To summarize briefly, all things that exist must come from something larger, and as we define God as an infinite, perfect being of infinite, perfect goodness, then all things must therefore stem from Him. Also, because we have within us this idea of God, which itself is big-ger than us and therefore must have come from God, then we humans, as we humans are in es-sence our thoughts, must have come from God. This is what I take issue with: if all things begin with God, then how can Descartes, without contradicting himself, begin his argument with Des-cartes?

The next argument of Descartes' that I find objectionable is, assuming God is infinite, perfect, and therefore not a deceiver, that Descartes' ideas, which he believes come from God, are true because God would not deceive him. This seems to me to be somewhat of a cheap fail-safe established to back up his arguments in case of a disagreement. I may be wrong, but it seems to me like Descartes is saying, albeit more verbosely and with more sophisticated language, "I thought of it, therefore it's true." This idea leaves room for much extrapolation. Take the follow-ing for example: Personally, I perceive the universe to be infinite, and not with my senses, as the universe is far beyond their range. This idea of the universe therefore does not come from with-out. Following Descartes' argument, this idea, as it is larger than me, cannot come from within. It must therefore come from God, and once again following Descartes argument, it must be true because God would not deceive me. Yet here is the issue-if Descartes arguments are to be tak-en for truth, then both God and the universe are infinite, and as such neither could have created the other. Following this, several options present themselves: 1) God is finite, meaning Descartes is wrong; 2) the universe is finite, meaning God has deceived me and therefore Des-cartes is wrong; 3) God and the universe are separate entities, which creates numerous contradic-tions in the origins of things and once again leads to Descartes being wrong; 4) God and the un-iverse are the same entity, but since deception exists in the universe and God is not a deceiver, this is either false or Descartes is wrong; 5) God does not exist, meaning Descartes is wrong; 6) the universe does not exist, once again meaning God has deceived me and Descartes is wrong; or 7) Descartes is wrong. Odds seem to point to Descartes being wrong.

I can see that my own reasoning is not perfect, but as I see it, Descartes argument is in-complete, which is why I remain dissatisfied with Meditations over all. I also take issue with several general facts about Descartes arguments, namely that he attempts to explain the un-iverse using logic and that he shapes his arguments somewhat like an upside-down pyramid, extrapolating expansively from a single foundation, which, like an upside-down pyramid, is ra-ther unstable. And so, while I found Meditations to be interesting in itself, that is as far as my opinion of it goes.
 
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